A few short poems....(Su/Si)

[Jacanorie]

I wish that you could see me.

See what I really am.

Deepest fears.

Secret wishes.

Desperate longings.

Fiery anger.

Vicious words.

You don’t know me.

Can’t begin to appreciate,

The darkness within.

 

 

 

I wish,

Sometimes.

I dream,

Occasionally.

I’m disappointed,

Always.

 

 

 

My heart aches,

My eyes feel heavy,

My soul is like lead,

I’m dragging myself along.

I’m losing it all again.

Just when I got it back.

I’m right where I started.

And I can’t take this anymore.

 

 

 

 

Save me.

I’m drowning.

Fading away.

Hurting inside.

Aching outside.

No escaping.

Pain follows.

Tears flow.

Take everything.

Leave nothing.

Empty shell.

No feelings.

Just pills.

And cuts.

Killing myself.

Slowly, surely.

Almost gone.

 

 

 

Would really like some feedback.....=)

[darkplace]

those poems touched me, my sister wrote some similar like those a while ago it helps to write stuff down what your feelings are. are you ok, whould you like to talk about what they mean ?

[Jacanorie]

I'm not okay....But....I don't know. If you're interested or you care, lol, you could pm me? But if not it's cool lol. Thank you so much for your comment. =) I'm honoured to have been able to touch you at all. Thank you.

[darkplace]

PM me back when your ready, really would like to talk about stuff