A poem, that says it all (friendship Lost)

[S4il]

--I think this says it all--

 

 

I title this: " Anchors Up, Now lost at Sea"

 

 

All i wanted was friendship, and nothing more

Instead i was faced with a closing door

 

Un-doing the ropes tethered to my boat

I hopelessly began too float

 

My feelings and my thoughts for you only grew

But now they are cut short because of you

 

The times iv 'e tried you can't understand

How openly i greeted with an extended hand

 

With nothing but little to go on with

Iv 'e undone my knots and now I'm at drift

 

I can't look back

It's to painful for me

Just think of me as a ship lost at sea

 

I wont come back

I've already made that decision

More heart ache isn't needed, for an already deep incision

 

looking back at the times i remember

But my eyes fill with tears

And my hands start to tremor

 

With No light from a house

With no shine from a star

I've distance myself so very far

 

While trying to help, and be of an assistance

It only Delivered me more resistance

 

The water ways are closed

And there is no more navigation

My contact stops here, no more relation

 

You wont understand, it's not worth thinking over

The friendship stays still as a water leaf clover

 

 

Goodbye Jen

 

 

you think it's good, and it gets to the point ??? should i write it out and give it too her, or just remember it and verbally state it. ??? ideas ???

[Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb]

Hey sorry about ur lost friendship...but hey, b more positive...ships lost at sea eventually find land again!

 

Its a pretty ok poem, hope things get well soon!

 

Happy Heb

[lunatic]

Sorry to hear about you losing a friend. I liked the poem alot and I can relate to it in many ways.

[neva_black_n_white]

hey.

i liked your poem, i can relate o that, losing a friend really isnt nice. anyway. nice work. life is a journey and if you work at things they can become better and more clear to what ios the right way to take your next road.

kel

[S4il]

Thank you all for your replies, it just losing someone i felt so close to, but it wasn't the same from her, It was just a waste of time on my part, and i learned a very important lesson from all of this....Thank you again. I really mean it.

[Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb]

Hey S4il, no problem..cheer up, its not the end of the world, there's so many people around to get to know...

 

Happy Heb

[swift44]

Hey that was a great poem I especially like it because i have a fear of losing friends and it has happened to me before, I hope you and your ex-friend can become close again. I think you should write more poems they are very good and it seems as if you have a talent for this Great Job keep up the good work.