S4il Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 --I think this says it all-- I title this: " Anchors Up, Now lost at Sea" All i wanted was friendship, and nothing more Instead i was faced with a closing door Un-doing the ropes tethered to my boat I hopelessly began too float My feelings and my thoughts for you only grew But now they are cut short because of you The times iv 'e tried you can't understand How openly i greeted with an extended hand With nothing but little to go on with Iv 'e undone my knots and now I'm at drift I can't look back It's to painful for me Just think of me as a ship lost at sea I wont come back I've already made that decision More heart ache isn't needed, for an already deep incision looking back at the times i remember But my eyes fill with tears And my hands start to tremor With No light from a house With no shine from a star I've distance myself so very far While trying to help, and be of an assistance It only Delivered me more resistance The water ways are closed And there is no more navigation My contact stops here, no more relation You wont understand, it's not worth thinking over The friendship stays still as a water leaf clover Goodbye Jen you think it's good, and it gets to the point ??? should i write it out and give it too her, or just remember it and verbally state it. ??? ideas ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 Hey sorry about ur lost friendship...but hey, b more positive...ships lost at sea eventually find land again! Its a pretty ok poem, hope things get well soon! Happy Heb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 Sorry to hear about you losing a friend. I liked the poem alot and I can relate to it in many ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted November 17, 2003 Share Posted November 17, 2003 hey. i liked your poem, i can relate o that, losing a friend really isnt nice. anyway. nice work. life is a journey and if you work at things they can become better and more clear to what ios the right way to take your next road. kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S4il Posted November 18, 2003 Author Share Posted November 18, 2003 Thank you all for your replies, it just losing someone i felt so close to, but it wasn't the same from her, It was just a waste of time on my part, and i learned a very important lesson from all of this....Thank you again. I really mean it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted November 18, 2003 Share Posted November 18, 2003 Hey S4il, no problem..cheer up, its not the end of the world, there's so many people around to get to know... Happy Heb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swift44 Posted November 20, 2003 Share Posted November 20, 2003 Hey that was a great poem I especially like it because i have a fear of losing friends and it has happened to me before, I hope you and your ex-friend can become close again. I think you should write more poems they are very good and it seems as if you have a talent for this Great Job keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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