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[sarey]

Alone under this abandoned, old tree,

the leaves dropping one by one,

as my tears do when I'm left alone,

when someone close to me leaves,

I wonder if this tree cries just like me.

 

 

Laying in the grass now,

I see a butterfly,

it flutters around me,

I imagine my Nan,

she loved them dearly,

I wonder if she can see me,

I wonder what she'd be thinking,

whether she would be proud,

or whether she would be mad.

 

 

Walking down a street,

with others around, joyful and happy,

I'm the odd one out,

with a frown instead of a smile,

alone is what I'm destined to be,

or so it seems.

 

 

I arrive home,

walking up these stairs,

and into my room,

I lay on my bed, thinking,

I wonder if this is how my life was planned,

alone, abandoned,

I scream so loud,

but it falls amoung deafened ears,

I cry so much,

but they don't see the tears.

 

 

I want someone to take my hand,

to never let go,

I want someone to love and care,

and never stop,

I want someone to hold me,

to never leave,

I want someone to stay,

and never leave me astray.

[Stu147]

Wow! Did you write this Sarey? I think it's beautiful. I really REALLY like this. For me one of the best poems I have read here.

[sarey]

I did.

Wrote it just now.

Feeling bit crappy so decided to write some poetry.

Thankyou Stu.

I appreciate your comments.

[girl friend]

Incredible hun,

I'm sorry u feel so alone.

[sarey]

thanks girl friend. x

[JadedStar]

Very nice writing Sarey.

 

Hopefully the sadness will lift tho honey.

[hosswhispra]

Both very expressive and deep, Sarey. I like the personification of the trees loosing their leaves-as our eyes "lose" tears.

[sarey]

thankyou hosswhispra, and Jaded

[tiredofvampires]

Very touching and deeply felt -- I could feel all of what you are saying.

 

I, too, love the part about the trees and tears, and the transition to the butterfly and your Nan.

 

I would love to see more of these. Keep writing.