bubbles Posted November 7, 2003 Share Posted November 7, 2003 I don't know what to say Or even where to start But I never would have guessed It'd be you to break my heart You can just walk away But I don't feel the same My love for you was true And to you it was all a game I wish there were a way I could go back in time To hold you in my arms As if you were still mine Please someone tell me when This pain will go away When I'll forget the past And move on to another day A day where just for once You face won't cross my mind I won't think of our memories Ill just leave them all behind I won't think of our good nights Or the way you made me feel I'll move on to someone new Someone whose love is real I won't miss your arms around me Holding me so tight I won't long to feel your body Pressed against mine through the night The memory of your kiss Will finally disappear And never again for you Shall I shed another tear I say all this right now Wishing it would be true But I know tonight, Ill go to bed, Crying over you.... p.s it's all true Link to comment
bdub Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Me too, I haven't teared up over her in nearly 2 weeks Link to comment
Luv_Suks Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Ditto. That was a beautiful. Wishing you strength to face another day tomorrow, and move forward with ur life... Link to comment
MissJBug Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Im really sorry your missing who your missing. If theres any faith I say dont give up, but dont be to there for them. If there is no faith, Id say, thers nothing you can do with thinking about this person, the only thing that passes this away is "time" when your really love someone its hard to let them go... but if it wasnt ment to be, than god wouldnt do it... right? hang in there, time heals all... if you need me for anything my screen name is jryan0604... ill help you through it all Link to comment
Sarah_Boo03 Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 that was absolutely beautiful, n i thing everyone can feel ya on that Link to comment
lunatic Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Sickining, because there is someone else feeling like I do out there. Awesome poem! Link to comment
puffdaddycurl Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Dang man, great poem yet the only thing that sucks is it brought back the same types of memories ive been having over my ex as well and i sorta want to thank you for that cause now i have really relized ho much i loveher and want her back. Thank you Link to comment
Mar Posted November 8, 2003 Share Posted November 8, 2003 Wow......AWESOME poem, I think every single one of us can relate to it and I myself got misty-eyed.....I'm sincerely hoping that the pain in that poem is in the past for you, and not the present. Thank you for sharing. Mar Link to comment
vfunkera Posted November 9, 2003 Share Posted November 9, 2003 i thought i was moving on, but that just brought all the memories back. if u keep thinking like that, then they will always stay. time heals u as was mentioned earlier. Im going to print that poem, but keep it somewhere safe until i can read it with getting a tear in my eye. Link to comment
heart4chris Posted February 25, 2004 Share Posted February 25, 2004 That was a beautiful poem. You have some real talent. I hate to see anyone hurting, especially over losing someone they care about, so I wish you sun in all your days. Keep up the good work, hope you feell better soon Ashlee Link to comment
Ladee-Jennifer Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 GrEat poeM loved it.i can so relate to it. i noe u wrote it to express what ur goin through but u helped me with a problem i was having thanx. Link to comment
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