Hrm, Time to start sharing i suppose

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Well, I have written for a long time and have maybe 500 or so poems that only myself and 1 or 2 other people have read. Feel like sharing for some reason. Heres a super shorty -

 

 

Tell me all your thoughts

I find it hard to feel,

Let me delve into your mind

create an open field

 

I promise to tread lightly

nothing I will stir,

Just let me delve into your mind

So i can make us like we were.

[doyathink]

No way I would let you into my mind. I know what you would do to it! lol

 

Nice. I like the style.

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Thanks

[istillluvu06]

Actually thats pretty damn good!!!

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Hey, thanks, like i said, i have never shared any of my writing - so many pages of it now, thought why not!!

[sandyv]

Hey Niceguy! Its really good!

 

Sandy

[Portage]

Really good work

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Thanks, i think you have all created a monster now.....I might have to start posting some others.....of course most of them are about relationships and "feelings"

[Portage]

^ How about car chases and gang wars??

 

awwwwwwwwwwwwww come on

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^^^^^ Hahahaha, Ok if you insist

[buckdawg]

damn good work.

 

all this poetry that's been posted lately is almost inspiring me

[Blazer]

I really liked that !

 

.... I promise to tread lightly

nothing I will stir ....

 

It has such a sincere and gentle feel to it. I hope you share more of your writing.

 

Thanks,

 

Blazer

[Jeen]

Ill try and hide my mind from you but with poetry like this it will be hard.

 

Thanks I loved it.

Jeen

 

And can we please have some more lol......

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Hey thanks Jeen, Blazer and Buckdawg , i do appreciate it..... I will post a few more in one thread......