YOU!

[just_smile]

hey guys,

i like to share something with you that i have been writing for a while, i just completed it a few days ago and didnt have time to post it so here it is

its called

YOU!

 

I just wanna sleep and never wake

Because you cause the tears i make

All you do is vent

And off on one you went

A long time to get over this i will take

 

People say think before you act

You never know how people will react

I hear all the door slam

You say your lifes a scam

Without realising its impact

 

It all seems like a downward slide

Its just killing me inside

How can you do this to me

Really dont you see

Until i realised why you hide

 

With you i have to be wise

When i look into your eyes

Deeper than you know

Or that i could ever show

I see your smiles disguise...

 

well thats it i hope you liked it

~LJ =;

any thoughts about it would be apreciated.

[Gaz]

Its very good, it sounds like you have a lot to write about....

[dude123]

Wow this is really great. Keep on writing.

[Dante]

nice dude, keep up the good work..

[just_smile]

hey guys

thanks for the responses i really appreciate it, its nice to know what people think

anyways thanks again

~LJ =;