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ok i have been just playing with it but i have a beat i just need more words and a title so feel free to add to this......

 

 

 

( no title )

 

I need a verse one...

 

 

(chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

have you ever thought theyd be the one.....

have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

 

(verse 2)

How many sleepless nights ive had because of you

thought about me and you and figured it was to good to be true

your arms around me my arms around you

you made me feel like nothing could get through

and i hope you feel the same way too

 

 

(chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

have you ever thought theyd be the one.....

have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

 

i need a third verse.......

 

 

 

(chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

have you ever thought theyd be the one.....

have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

 

 

and i need an ending

 

 

 

i want a ttile that is not have you ever if possible because there are too many of that song

 

thanks guys

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Lying here without you near, it gives me such an ache

My hand's in the space where you should be, my heart is threatening to break

Oh, how can I fight all the misery

When I can't feel the touch that comforts me

I just don't know how much I can take

 

Tbh, I can't quite make out the tune, but maybe you can make this work as a first verse with some minor word tweaking. As far as the end goes, try to make it upbeat. (The song will sell better.)

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Katiekate010

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Actually i think i have finished it tell me what ya think

 

(Title)

I Miss The Feeling

 

 

(Verse 1)

Sitting here, laying here standing there,

Wishing you were near

Loving you its killing me

Even though I know that you and me can never be

 

 

(Chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

Have you ever thought they’d be the one.....

Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

 

(Verse 2)

How many sleepless nights I’ve had because of you

Thought about me and you and wishes it wasn’t to good to be true

Your arms around me my arms around you

You made me feel like nothing could get through

And I hope you feel the same way too

 

 

(Chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

Have you ever thought they’d be the one.....

Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

(Verse 3)

Sitting here without you near, it gives me such an ache

My hand's in the space where you should be, my heart is threatening to break

Oh, how can I fight all the misery

When I can't feel the touch that comforts me

I just don't know how much I can take

Let's just hope m heart doesn't break

 

 

(Chorus)

Have you ever been in love so much it hurt inside

Have you ever missed someone so much it made you cry,

 

Have you ever sat and thought all day about someone

Have you ever thought they’d be the one.....

Have you ever...... ooohh have you ever

 

 

(Ending)

Have you ever, have you ever ooohhh have you ever cause I have

Have you ever ohhhhh have you ever

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