Picture Perfect Girl - A song not a poem

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

She has a hidden secret,

The reason that she smiles,

To keep this hidden secret,

She will smile for miles.

 

And there’s more then you will ever know,

To this picture perfect girl,

She cries more then she smiles,

But her smiles they last for miles,

As long as you’re around to see these smiles.

 

She tries to keep it all in,

Keep it hidden from herself,

How she doesn’t even have a clue,

To why she fell so hard for somebody like you,

You were never her type,

But you make her smile,

Would you even recognize her,

This picture perfect girl.

 

And there’s more then you will ever know,

To this picture perfect girl,

She cries more then she smiles,

But her smiles they last for miles,

As long as you’re around to see these smiles.

 

And when she gets home,

She cleans and cooks and cleans again,

Tries to keep daddy happy,

She doesn’t want him drunk again.

She doesn’t want another scar,

Or even another bruise,

All this girl wants,

Is a boy like you.

 

And there’s more then you will ever know,

To this picture perfect girl,

She cries more then she smiles,

But her smiles they last for miles,

As long as you’re around to see these smiles.

 

Her smiles will last for miles,

As long as you’re around to see these smiles.

[capbit]

Thats awesome. I never look at the poem forum here, but I must say I really understood your song as I can relate to it a little. I could see yellowcard covering this.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Hehe thanks, yeah i was worried cuz it seemed all mushy but the tune actually has a beet to it and some drums (well in my own little head anyway Thankyou

[Lana0120]

It's great. Have you written the music to go with it?

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

No, i don't play anything so i can't.. But one day when i'm out of school and stuff i want to get music written for it and i'll get singing lessons so i can actually sing my songs. That would be interesting at least hehe.

[Lana0120]

I think that's a great idea.

[indigo_scar]

Yeh- i say go for it! I loved your song, and could really relate to it. I just totally love these two lines:

She cries more then she smiles,

But her smiles they last for miles.

 

It's so sad, yet so true for so many. Keep it up! x

[girl friend]

Thats brilliant!!!!!

Beautifully written. Keep it up!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thankyou I'm so happy people actually like it. It means alot to mean.