AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 She has a hidden secret, The reason that she smiles, To keep this hidden secret, She will smile for miles. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. She tries to keep it all in, Keep it hidden from herself, How she doesn’t even have a clue, To why she fell so hard for somebody like you, You were never her type, But you make her smile, Would you even recognize her, This picture perfect girl. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. And when she gets home, She cleans and cooks and cleans again, Tries to keep daddy happy, She doesn’t want him drunk again. She doesn’t want another scar, Or even another bruise, All this girl wants, Is a boy like you. And there’s more then you will ever know, To this picture perfect girl, She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. Her smiles will last for miles, As long as you’re around to see these smiles. Link to comment
capbit Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 Thats awesome. I never look at the poem forum here, but I must say I really understood your song as I can relate to it a little. I could see yellowcard covering this. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 27, 2007 Author Share Posted August 27, 2007 Hehe thanks, yeah i was worried cuz it seemed all mushy but the tune actually has a beet to it and some drums (well in my own little head anyway Thankyou Link to comment
Lana0120 Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 It's great. Have you written the music to go with it? Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 27, 2007 Author Share Posted August 27, 2007 No, i don't play anything so i can't.. But one day when i'm out of school and stuff i want to get music written for it and i'll get singing lessons so i can actually sing my songs. That would be interesting at least hehe. Link to comment
Lana0120 Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 I think that's a great idea. Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 Yeh- i say go for it! I loved your song, and could really relate to it. I just totally love these two lines: She cries more then she smiles, But her smiles they last for miles. It's so sad, yet so true for so many. Keep it up! x Link to comment
girl friend Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 Thats brilliant!!!!! Beautifully written. Keep it up! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 29, 2007 Author Share Posted August 29, 2007 Thankyou I'm so happy people actually like it. It means alot to mean. Link to comment
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