Baby_Blue_Eyes Posted March 30, 2007 Share Posted March 30, 2007 Six Steps In Life by SB It all started with a Friendship that turned into a smile. followed by our two hands meeting. the question was go out with me the answer to come was yes It all started with a Courtship that turned into love followed by our eyes meeting. the question was do you the answer was yes i love you It all started with a Relationship that turned into a passion followed by our lips meeting the question was are you sure the answer was its worth it It all started with a Partnership that turned into a conflict followed by pieces of us meeting the question was are you ready for this the answer was ready for the world It all started with Two Lives that turned into one followed by our hearts meeting the question was will you the answer was I do It all started with Two People that turned into one person followed by a beautiful meeting the question was what is it the answer was a boy It ended with a Family (Well what do you all think about this. I love writing but i never have posted anything for some feedback on it. Just thought I would do something to pass some time.) Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 30, 2007 Share Posted March 30, 2007 Thats really really sweet Its nice to hear a happy poem once in a while. I really loved the way you wrote it, the pattern you followed was quite different from what i have read. Please post again i would love to read more. Link to comment
girl friend Posted March 30, 2007 Share Posted March 30, 2007 Yes that was good. Nice and optimistic. I was almost waiting for something to go wrong. In this day and age we are so cynical about love. But it CAN work. Your poem illustrates that. And those who find it have stepped into paradise on earth! Link to comment
Gold Hawk Posted April 1, 2007 Share Posted April 1, 2007 Yes that was good. Nice and optimistic. I was almost waiting for something to go wrong. In this day and age we are so cynical about love. But it CAN work. Your poem illustrates that. And those who find it have stepped into paradise on earth! I too was waiting for something to go arwy and it didn't. Cycisism is born out of life experiences and pain very few escape its wrath. I too once believed. Very nice. Link to comment
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