Thankyou

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

While i lay here,

Alone and crying,

Knowing that without you,

These tears would mean i'm dying.

 

Hearing your voice,

On that phone i'm holding,

Wishing i could look into your eyes,

So you could see me unfolding.

 

The secrets and lies,

I've tried to leave behind.

The lonliness,

I've tried so hard to hide.

 

This heart thats still pounding,

These tears that want stop falling,

This heart thats still breaking,

Yet its your name i keep on calling.

 

Why do you still answer,

Why do you hear my cries,

Will you always see,

I'm not just telling lies.

 

Don't let me go,

Keep those arms around me,

Don't let me break,

Just let me be.

 

See now with you by my side,

Oh hunny i got nothing to hide,

Love you more,

For you see my inner core.

 

Thankyou for everything.

I'll never let you go,

Forever i'll dream,

And never will you know.

 

You helped me more,

Then you can see,

Its because of you.

I am ME!

[Boughtandpaidfor]

You helped me more,

Then you can see,

Its because of you.

I am ME!

 

What a great ending. Lovely poem!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

thankyou very much. I don't like the way i've written this poem but everything in it came fom the heart so i guess thats better then a poem that sounds good and has no meaning. Thanks

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks ellie, your comments always make me smile.

[TheFallenShadow]

Rozi,

 

Very well written and conveyed, simply beautiful....keep on writing...

 

Fallen

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks so much I feel great getting comments from you cuz your work is fantastic!

[Daddy Bear]

Very real, just the way I like it. Keep up the award-winning work!

 

SB

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

wow thanks heaps