LostLoveinLosAngeles Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 I Want To Get Lost But It’s Always Time To Go She Watches Me With New Fresh Eyes I Stare As Her Sunglow Skintone Melts Into The Bed Is This What Love Is Supposed To Be? I’m Not Afraid Anymore To Ask Her Any Question, So I Raise My Hand Shes Stop The Earth Just To Listen To Me I Didn’t Know How Important It Feels To Be Important Some People Make You Feel Like You’re At Home While Others Make You Feel All Alone Love Is Not That Complicated Find The One Who Makes You Feel Youthful, Find The One That Makes You Feel Alive I Found My Bestfriend At Target Buying Me Body Wash And Deodorant I Found My Love Trying To Hide What She Feels In The Living Room. If My Heart Was The Bass It Would Go Boom My Bestlove Knows What I Am, And Wants Me To Become What Im Supposed To Be, Because She Believes In Me What A Concept? Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 Great work there, sounds like you found a pretty great love there Some People Make You Feel Like You’re At Home While Others Make You Feel All Alone I loved those two lines i really did, they hit close to home right now. But anyway great poem and i hope to read more. Link to comment
NKP Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 Yeah great poem I agree with Rozi those two lines are the best Link to comment
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