Please Real Advice Needed!!!!!!!

[Anastasia_Mixali]

Please give me real advice. I need the help of all of you on ENA. I know all of you are intelligent and deep, and I really need some help.

 

I need to write an essay on why I want to be a doctor, but I am not poet, and I'm tying to get my point accross. Does anyone have any ideas, what sounds good? I want to be a doctor because (blank). Thanks, I really appreciate the help.

[Honey Pumpkin]

Well, why DO you want to be a doctor? Honestly? No matter how badly put, tell us why you want to be a doctor, and we can hammer it into shape.

 

For instance - I think there are loads of themes: personal development; lifetime commitment in a field that will allow specialisation and development, ongoing challenges, analytical and hard work, but working with people; doing good, opportunities, a chance to give and receive. It's a mutually beneficial thing.

 

You need to think honestly about all the reasons why, and then shape it into an essay. Take a piece of paper to a cafe tomorrow, sit down with a ginormous latte, and free thing. Write down every random thought about why you want to do this, no matter how silly. Start to think broadly. You can do this, it's not hard.

 

Good luck!

[CarnelianButterfly]

Why do you want to be a doctor?

 

Tell us in the most basic way you can. Start simple, you can always add more.

[friscodj]

Sit down, clear your head, write from the heart, and post the product here. I think that would be the best way we could help you; our advice here will probably be more effective in suggesting changes to something you create.

 

As a tip I've found to be useful, mention a specific situational example from your life, how you overcame some difficulty, and spin it to illustrate qualities that would make you an excellent doctor.

[AwdreeHpburn]

well....I'm not sure how anyone here could help you with the reason YOU want to become a Dr. but as someone already said, I too am more than happy to offer suggestions on flow, punctuation, re-phrasing or re-wording, analogies etc. if you want to put out a rough draft....