SkylinesTurnstiles Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 You walked away Your footprints on the cracks in the sidewalks I made myself bleed You looked away You said your nasty things I asked you to stop You turned away You looked at me in Terror, Disapointment and Disgrace I asked you for help You ran away Your eyes Filled with anger Please help me!Im sorry You Moved away You said you couldnt take care of me I said good bye Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 I really like it, i has something deep about it, can kinda picture the situation you're writing about, well done. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 Liza your an awesome gal and you have awesome talents Keep writing cuz your work is amazing This poem is so sweet and i hope whoever did this to you gets what they deserve. love you always babe rozi! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 29, 2006 Share Posted August 29, 2006 Marvelous poem and yea, if a loser did that, then you know what they always say "What goes around comes around". It happens most of the times. Link to comment
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted August 30, 2006 Author Share Posted August 30, 2006 Thanks.Yeah i was thinking about some different people Link to comment
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