KillTheSilence Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 I place myslef near a stream. Birds are softly chirping in the cool mountain air. No one but me knows about this place. No one there to cast me aside. The soothing sound of a gentle waterfall fills the air with a cascade of serenity. The water is crystal clear. I can easily make out the face of the person I'm holding underwater. First time i've smiled in years... Link to comment
KillTheSilence Posted August 22, 2006 Author Share Posted August 22, 2006 i should probably say i got that from link removed i revised it for me and i liked it even better when it felt like it was in my point of view Link to comment
nottoogreen Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Starts softly, ends a little bit cynical. Link to comment
Steven1607307306 Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Nice imagery, and great message. Keep on writing!! Link to comment
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