PRSOV Posted August 6, 2006 Share Posted August 6, 2006 A new memory is made each and every day, I only want to make them with you, and share them along the way, No matter what happens in life you know I will be here, to help you wish on a shooting star, and catch a silent tear. Link to comment
Relationship Coach Posted August 6, 2006 Share Posted August 6, 2006 Nice mate, very nice. Link to comment
coollady1957 Posted August 6, 2006 Share Posted August 6, 2006 I love the poem !! Very good Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 that's good, but what made you decide to stop after four lines? Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 7, 2006 Author Share Posted August 7, 2006 Sometimes a shorter poem is better than a long one... Like I thought it would be romantic to write it down on a piece of paper and give it to your love one when your intimate. Oh I don't know LoL Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 i'm not saying it was incomplete, it just seemed like you were on a roll... Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 7, 2006 Author Share Posted August 7, 2006 Do you think I should make it longer? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 me? no, not necessarily. a poem is complete when its author says it is. i would, however, encourage you to post more of them for our reading enjoyment. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 I think its sweet just the way it is Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 7, 2006 Author Share Posted August 7, 2006 You want me to post more bender? Do you think they are worthy of that? Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 i see no reason why you shouldn't. nice avvie, btw. where did you find it? i don't remember seeing that pic when i was searching through Google Images for my recent Bender Rodriguez avatar. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 Wow, that's sweet and at the same time it's true; new memories stayed there forever!!!!!!!! Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 8, 2006 Author Share Posted August 8, 2006 Bent, I have taken a liking to futurama lately, it's played quite a bit on the fox 8 channel. Avatars need to be changed periodically. Love yours too, your like a father figure. PRSOV Link to comment
Steven1607307306 Posted August 9, 2006 Share Posted August 9, 2006 I think it's very well written. definitely complete, catures the emotion, and gets the message accross. I love it actually. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 9, 2006 Share Posted August 9, 2006 whos in love? could it be? maybe? who knows.. its kinda.. beautiful.. id melt anyway Link to comment
PRSOV Posted August 10, 2006 Author Share Posted August 10, 2006 Thanks guys for you great feedback I will write another poem soon hopefully Link to comment
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