Rawk-1 Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 Some time ago Perhaps a day or two We where in love We held hands in the park The wind blowing through our fingers Clouds beneath our feet We were in love We kissed beside the stars The moon dancing in your eyes We where in love J.C Henry Copyright ©2006 J.C Henry Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted July 14, 2006 Share Posted July 14, 2006 do you think love passes by that quickly? good poem. just got me thinking. "some time ago. perhaps a day or two" Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 15, 2006 Share Posted July 15, 2006 Wow that was a short and well written poem!!!!!! Link to comment
Rawk-1 Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 We were together for almost three years and prior to that friends in highschool. it was our first serious relationship, so we probably made every mistake in the book. My first mistake was that I tried to give her everything, i honestly believed we were in love. she was my best friend. however we argued alot and she had a big issue with trust and displaying her emotions. on the other hand some things change and when its over it always seems to soon. glad you like the poem! Link to comment
Rawk-1 Posted July 31, 2006 Author Share Posted July 31, 2006 Thanks. do you write as well? Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 31, 2006 Share Posted July 31, 2006 Not to worry about it, there's always someone out there waiting for you!!!!!!!! Link to comment
model_heather Posted August 1, 2006 Share Posted August 1, 2006 I used to write. I used to write a lot. I lost my passion for writing over the years though. Depression was my main motivation for my words and I'm happy now.. Since I hate writing abut flowers and puppy love, I don;t. Link to comment
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