shorty20 Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 Why do you play These games with my mind You string me along Then leave me behind You words I no longer Take for the truth Instead of believing you Now I need proof I gave it my all I opened my heart But you played me Right from the start Why give it up? You had so much to gain. You confuse me so much You drive me insane I need to get out Erase you from my heart But I'll say one last thing Before I depart When your games get old When you're lonley and sad Think about me The girl you could've had Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 Hey Shorty20 I really liked your poem it gives you a great visual on what your going thru. Great Job! =D> =D> =D> =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymous_presence Posted September 29, 2005 Share Posted September 29, 2005 Wow! I love the way you manage to say everything so eloquently while keeping the rhythm and the rhyme! You are really talented! It's a good message to just move on when someone's toying with you, and find someone who truly respects you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted October 3, 2005 Share Posted October 3, 2005 I love it it's deep yet still simple and understandable keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
volution Posted October 3, 2005 Share Posted October 3, 2005 Story of my life... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goofy7878 Posted October 4, 2005 Share Posted October 4, 2005 You turned a bad day good for me.............thank you so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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