poem called Sadness is NOT Bad

[bilal72401]

my girl debra left me for her ex, i am not really sure why, but i was missing her one day and i wrote this poem its been 4 months since she left me, i am over her, but i still miss her.

 

This Poem is called:

 

Sadness is NOT bad

 

The gardens glow, as the rivers flow

I see your face shinning in the water

When will it rise and kiss my lips?

 

I saw you leave as you tore me apart

I did not say a word, because i was in pain

 

Now i see you smiling all in your world

Your so happy, I dont even exist

 

I dont know what i have done wrong

I feel like dying leaves falling from the trees

Seems like no one cares, no one exists

 

Please tell me why you left

So i can quit cutting all over my wrist

 

 

 

 

Please tell me what you think

[metallicachica247]

thats pretty good actually... i write a lot of songs and not so many poems, but that is good

[bilal72401]

thank you very much for your response