Box of crayons

[HoldMeTightly]

First Poetic/Lyrical post on this forum. Please leave some constructive criticism so I can work on my writing. Thank you so much for your time!

 

My Box of crayons/Imaginary World

 

It hurts to hear your voice

I remember every word you said

Maybe I'm crazy

But please get the f#$@ out of my head.

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color an imaginary world

Where you and I once hid.

 

You and I are holding hands

Our fingers of wax entwined

As we melt away in the sun

Someday happiness I will find

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color an imaginary world

Where you and once I hid.

 

The tears will hit the paper

Then the paper will get wet

The world is unaffected

But my blood would be a threat.

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color an imaginary world

Where you and I once hid.

 

We hid in our own world

Where we could not be hurt

It was fake, and we knew it

Then you made me feel like dirt

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color my imaginary world

Where you and I once hid.

 

Now I sit here all alone

Quietly on my bed

And I color away my pain

To get you out of my head

 

Please leave me alone

I just want to move on

But the colors blend endlessly

Where our love was once drawn

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color my imaginary world

Where you and I once hid.

 

Now I am alone

And I thank God for it

But I rip up this paper

Because reality is $***

 

So I take this box of crayons

And like a little kid

I color the imaginary world

Where you and I once hid.

It was where you and I once hid.

We once hid

Once hid.

Together

We were together

I hide alone.

[From_Now_On]

i absolutely love the idea of that

[HoldMeTightly]

uh. thanks!

[bilal72401]

wow great poem!!!!!!!!!!! Really awsome, keep writing!

[HoldMeTightly]

thx