Ravenshadow Posted June 25, 2003 Share Posted June 25, 2003 Well this one is a little dark....but I still think it's pretty good I'm constantly breaking Everyone's taking Nobody's helping Nobody's giving I'm alone looking at the edge of eternity A sky a fire a burning sea A land of hate and pain The oceans all a blood stain Warped and twisted Being enlisted To the devil's side Nowhere to run and nowhere to hide God has given me no extra chances The blood spills the hate constantly advances Burning spiritually Rotting visually The hate consumes me Happy I'll never be I pierce my flesh with the knife And I watch as everything flies by, my life Link to comment
daisy_rides Posted June 25, 2003 Share Posted June 25, 2003 You are really good at writing that stuff, I really like this one, it's very visual with all the 'blood staind' it's awsome. I hope that there will be more. -Daisy- Link to comment
pi_anochik Posted June 25, 2003 Share Posted June 25, 2003 Very beautiful... That's the way I feel about life. Link to comment
MR Posted June 25, 2003 Share Posted June 25, 2003 Very nice, i think a lot of us have been to that place at sometime or another. Keep up the good work! Link to comment
Ravenshadow Posted June 25, 2003 Author Share Posted June 25, 2003 thx i appreciate it Link to comment
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