I wrote this because of a dream.

[krylon]

In the moon light bitter-sweet intimacy, the twilight hour reflects from yours to mine. Like some wizards spell both entranced in the impending doom, beautiful the moment is. Oblivious to anything but the twilight we share.

 

 

 

I don't think it's completely done, but i'm gonna' keep it that way. Gives the reader something to think about, in my opinion that is.

[SPark]

Beautiful! I love it.

[krylon]

Thanks.

[FaithHopeTrust]

I love it! I'm interested to see if you finish it, Post it if you do!!

[blueangel]

hmm... indeed indeed. I'd say that, frankly, it was very good. hem hem indeed.

 

lol- pretending to be sophicated but I have no idea what I'm talking about. I usually like more lyrical ones, with more rhyme. But that doesnt mean yours isnt good because it really is.

 

Indeed indeed.

[krylon]

Thanks everyone.