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[cooldude1234]

Commercial Reception

 

Nothing but lies

In your minds

Turn off the cable

And you'll be able

To see reality twisted

You shouldn't have listened

Media deception

And commercial reception

 

Death, destruction from lies

Cut illusion and ties

 

Corporate profits on the rise

The masses watch their demise

Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth

Media lies, there is no truth.

[Sadness_Creeping]

I like it!

 

good job and kept writing them