naecha Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Hey Everyone... I wrote this for MrMister1...I hope you like it. Oh and to fill you in if you didn't know...he helped me get over being raped. Please reply with comments, improvements, etc... Naecha My mind is a place Where I like to stray. I can think of a face Dream about it all day. When you come to mind I smile happily. You're so friendly and kind Almost like family. You make me happy. But when you get mad And feel really crappy It just makes me feel sad. You have helped me through My troubles in life. You've helped me stay true Though your life was in strife. So thankyou so much I know it's been tough From these small things as such My life's no longer rough. Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 Aww, that was sweet . Any others you have made before? Link to comment
naecha Posted November 14, 2004 Author Share Posted November 14, 2004 yeah i have written other poems for people..there's another one by me called "Love" i wrote that when for my boyfriend last year. i wrote one for another guy when i stuffed him around..but i'm not gonna post it because it's a bit personal. Link to comment
naecha Posted November 14, 2004 Author Share Posted November 14, 2004 oh and thanks HEAPS thatguy04...no one else has replied and i was starting to think it really sucked!! Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 No problem, and I'm sure others have similar thoughts about your poem, they just don't know how to put it down in post form. Link to comment
naecha Posted November 14, 2004 Author Share Posted November 14, 2004 oh ok..well i wish they would!! i sort of take writing poems rather seriously...but if there is no input from thsoe reading then i don't know if i'm good or if i suck at it and should give up Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 Well no matter what anyone says (or doesn't say in this case ) you should never give up something you really like, like your poetry. Link to comment
naecha Posted November 14, 2004 Author Share Posted November 14, 2004 oh yeah i know...thanks. still if i'm no good i don't wanna post them all on here... Link to comment
Mr Mister1 Posted November 14, 2004 Share Posted November 14, 2004 This is without a doubt my all time favorite poem! Link to comment
naecha Posted November 14, 2004 Author Share Posted November 14, 2004 Thanks MrMister1!! And thanks for everything you've done for me!! I really appreciate it! MWAH Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 See, I told ya it was a good poem . Link to comment
naecha Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 yeah but he only said that because I wrote it for him!! If it were for someone else he'd be like ... OH My GOD this chick sucks!! Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 Naecha, No, this poem is good and it's sweet that you wrote it for Mr Mister 1. Like Thatguy04 said, even if people did say you did suck, which nobody should say because that poem was really good, you should keep writing. It's a good way to express feelings and if you are satisfied with your work then that is all that should matter. Keep writing, great job. under* Link to comment
naecha Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 thanks....but I don't know if I am satisfied with what I write!! Everytime I read them I change bits... Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 I change bits of my writing everytime too. It's cool, 8) But don't quit writing. If you quit writing, then you should find another way to express feelings like art or something. under* Link to comment
naecha Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 haha...my drawing is so much worse that my writing!!! Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 15, 2004 Share Posted November 15, 2004 haha...my drawing is so much worse that my writing!!! Mine too. That is why I have to write. under* Link to comment
naecha Posted November 15, 2004 Author Share Posted November 15, 2004 kewal...what are some of your poems?? if you don't mind can you maybe put one on here so i can read it please?? Link to comment
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