Delaurence23 Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 my mind in a depressive state felt like death was my fate in a dark hole with my pen in my hand i sat writing suicidie notes to all my friends and fam i had been robbed of my sanity and behind my eyelides the tears were errupting and sinking into my salty wounds i met you in a dark memory sitting the pool without a clue about ready to kill myself was on my mind to dround myself in the dark water of the mystic ever land your words, your mind, your eyes kept me sanitized in a way you took my knife wiped the blood from my veins and told me it would be ok i never knew you had such control but your words more than i could hold you made my heart raise from the pits of hell and once again i fell i fell for you... from the kisses to your deepest sympathys i rested my head on your shoulders and we cryed together.. Link to comment
in_the_mirror Posted November 11, 2004 Share Posted November 11, 2004 i love it. it reminds me of my past and somewhat of what i feel now. keep up the great writing. Link to comment
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