Is this anything?

[gcmc1121]

Soaring through the skies so high so far away

Looking back a world so dim so lifeless,

What flies up must one day fall back down

Falling faster and faster till one day hitting the ground

 

Thoughts of the sky so bright so beautiful

Head tilted up as the stars fly by to the corners of the universe,

So bright so brilliant they shine as they zip accross my eyes

Come back don't leave me here stranded I cried silently

 

Ninety-three million miles a way from the sun the light shines a path

Frighteningly stepping along hoping to return home the sun hides,

Dark and afraid the moon reaches out it's helping hand

Lost and found the moon travels accross the sky only to reveal the sun

 

Home is in the soul, where you feel is home he told me.

 

Is this anything? Some poetry guide thing told me to write about a topic so I picked an event or rather chapter of my life. Felt a little lighter after writing it.

[SpottiOtti]

Regardless of what the "critics" say, I'd say if you felt a little lighter after writing it then it's something.