nikkinoodles Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 I was walking along the street kinda dazed, my head in the clouds, In the Dark of night, it drew me in That distant glowing I stumbled towards and what I saw Was a girl through a glass plane Standing in the light The look in her eyes, So distant and empty So sad her face Confused her movements Why was I so enthralled, so captured? I take a step closer, and so does she My movements reflecting Those that I see She holds out her hand to the glass, I reply the gesture, to touch fingers, through the solid shield cant bare to carry on, I turn away and run and run, it starts to rain and I find shelter taking up refuge, I crouch to keep warm thoughts lingering on what I just saw I wipe away the tears, falling from my face I had seen the soul within, I felt all the pain, trapped for so many years All alone, with no one to turn to about my reflection in the mirror? Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 I really like this poem. It seems here lately I've read alot of poems on here, about reflecting on oneself, and I this one is really amazing. Keep writing. under* Link to comment
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