crizlee Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 sick, tired, and wishful, these are the things im feeling. i skipped school and stayed home all day, trying my best to sleep. went to work, another day passes by. another revolution around this yellow sun complete. another solar system in space. just another dot in the universe. just another sunrise to move on to. to another day. Link to comment
ForAnother Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 strange but interesting. ForAnother Link to comment
frday Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Yeah, nice poem. If that speaks out your feelings/thoughts, well I hope you get back your zest for life.. Link to comment
Gauchori Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 looks like you have been studyng the stars a lot... nice, interesting, and short poem... Link to comment
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