Poem about my mother's and mine relationship...please read

[JynX]

This is something I wrote a while back...it's something I might give my mother one day so she'll see my point of view on hers and mine relationship...please comment!

 

*I'm Sorry*

 

I'm sorry I'm not perfect

I'm sorry I'm not you

I'm sorry I keep trying and never make it through

 

I'm sorry I'm not good enough

I'm sorry I'm just me

I'm sorry that I need you in ways I always do

 

I'm sorry that you've hurt me

I'm sorry my scars won't heal

I'm sorry for my pillow and all the tears it's seen

 

I'm sorry you didn't want me

I'm sorry that I came

I'm sorry I keep waisting your precious time in vain

 

I'm sorry that you're sorry

I'm sorry we are through

Most of all I'm sorry I've cried these tears of pain

 

JyNx

[Tinkerbell]

Beautifully written, if you do decide to share it with your mother I'm sure it'll get quite a reaction out of her.

One small thing though - It's spelled wasting, not waisting.

[Scout]

To be honest, if my child gave me that poem I would be devastated and racked with guilt for the rest of my life.

 

On the other hand, when I was a teenager, there were plenty of times I would have loved to give my Mom a poem like that!

[under_the_pressure]

That poem is very deep, and I know it came from the heart. I know how it feels, how they want you to be something you aren't.

 

I don't think I could my Mother a poem like that. It would crush her, and no matter how badly she makes me feel, I know it's not with intention and I still love her so. I just couldn't do it.

 

Keep writing, it helps.

 

under*

[i_hate_the_world47]

wonderful poem.If you do decide to give that to your mom,i am sure you will see a change.

 

~meagan~