i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 A long lonely stare One last kiss A last look at love A last feeling of bliss His presense lingers Yet he's long gone Broken forever This love is done But hearts dont stop loving They break instead The hurt is so strong You would gladly take a bullet in the head Life goes on Yet hearts still broken Love is sneaky A dark deadly token Hey guys,this poem isnt great,but its my feelings.Enjoy! ~Meagan~ Link to comment
drahcir Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 "You would gladly take a bullet in the head " --thats a bit of an extreme measure for not having the one you love (or loved). Being unloved can be painful, but killing oneself is worse. Good poem though. Actually very original. Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 lol Very original. Umm... very depressing though and what drahcir said is right. A bullet will help you out, it will just send you to the next step. Umm... I liked the poem though. Short but... depressing. lol I like that kind of poems, I usually write them as well. Too much talking. Take care 8) Link to comment
leah_mac Posted September 15, 2004 Share Posted September 15, 2004 i reallyyyy like it.. it is depressing... but i like those type of poems.. they actually help me.. to know that other people feel the way i do.. anyways .. i love it=D Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 15, 2004 Author Share Posted September 15, 2004 Thanx for the comments everyone.im glad you liked it.It was depressing but got the point acros.Anyway thanx. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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