xsomegirlx Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 I stare at the phone… waiting… waiting for it to ring… to hear your voice… but no… just silence… the clock ticks quietly… then louder and louder… my heart pounds in my chest… louder and louder… I am completely alone… the silence is driving me crazy… you told me I'd never be alone… so why am I… you promised you'd never let me go… so why do I sit by the phone… alone… going mad from the sound of the deafening silence… Link to comment
bluey Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 i like it kinda the situation i was in a few weeks ago Link to comment
xsomegirlx Posted September 4, 2004 Author Share Posted September 4, 2004 thanks! those situations are never good! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 That was a very well written poem.I loved it.I hope to hear more from you in the future. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
xsomegirlx Posted September 4, 2004 Author Share Posted September 4, 2004 thanks a lot! I'm hoping for more also! I'll keep you posted tho! Link to comment
Protex Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 I'm really able to relate to that poem. Very nice. Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 i loved your poem it was great hardcore Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 I really like your poem, it was good. And I, too have been in that situation a few times. under Link to comment
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