i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 Fallen angel Broken wings The sky bursts open Heaven sings Get up little girl Wipe your bloody tears Your sins have been forgiven Replaced by unimaginable fears Then the sky closes The clouds roll in The ground crumbles As hell pulls her in But then it all stops As reality comes into view The only thing between heaven and hell Is you Comments anyone. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 i love it it is so buetifull it made me cry Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 Whoa! That's such a good poem. It really impressed me. Great job =D>. Link to comment
ComputerGuy Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 Wow, that'sa good poem....keep up the good work Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted August 21, 2004 Share Posted August 21, 2004 that poem was amazing. good job under Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 22, 2004 Author Share Posted August 22, 2004 Thanx guys. ~meagan~ Link to comment
jennifermlaw Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 great poem..very touching. Link to comment
June4life Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Great poem, and great imagery used! wow! Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 WOW THATS AWESOME! haha it makes me want to hug you! [hug] i know its virtual and theres no body heat, but just pretend {body heat} Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 23, 2004 Author Share Posted August 23, 2004 Lol thanx nothing.And thanx everyone else for the comments. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
tornado0121 Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 i don't really get it... haha sorry, but what does it mean, exactly is it an angry poem or a happy poem, im sort of lost sorry, i guess its just me Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 24, 2004 Author Share Posted August 24, 2004 It is explaining that the only line stopping you from heaven or hell is yourself. ~meagan~ Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 It definitely makes sense, it's really deep. i thought it was incredible. great poem. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 26, 2004 Author Share Posted August 26, 2004 Thanx all.Your comments really inspire me to write more. ~meagan~ Link to comment
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