a happy poem by me, very rare:)

[dpressedone89]

a swift wind cools the night

shadows fall accross the sea

the moon hits your face

i think of what could be

 

your eyes sparkle in the light

as shadows dance upon your face

with such eloquence you speak

every word spreading grace

 

i hold your hands in mine

and my eyes start to tear

you could be anywhere with anyone

and your with me standing here

 

into your eyes i fall fully

no where else do i wish to be

many people in the world

but right now just you and me

 

-stitches aka The Antihero

do you like it?any oppinions? feedback of anykind appreciated

[someone51189]

wow.. uve got alot of talent.. i love this.. have u thought of sending it to the gurl that made u feel this way? she'd fall head over heals for it!!

[lookingformyredangel]

wow thats good and it's good to see that its a happy one for a change nicely done keep up the happy

[mtastic]

dpressedone89,

 

I like it. Nothing against any of the other poems that have been put up, but its a nice change to see a more upbeat poem once in a while. Regardless of content however, you have again proven yourself to be a great poet.

 

Keep up the good work,

mtastic

[under_the_pressure]

Great poem, really sweet.

 

under*

[i_hate_the_world47]

great poem.It shows you can write about more then death.

 

~Meagan~

[iam_nimit]

Very sweet poem, very sweet. Love it. Do you have some more. Please PM me some more. LOve the poem of urs.