long have i waited and now that time has come

[hardcore]

here i am

i am just a smpile man.

with just a simple plan.

to live life to its fullest .

if i can .

but there were may days.

and nigths that i felt.

incompleat.

until she came in to my life.

i felt i rathed died .

but she has showen me the ligth.

and i fell for the frist time like i am alive.

but alass i fear love has never been there.

for me you see .

but given time i think .

this will never end .

so i give her my haret and hope and pray.

that she will not lauge and turn away.

but aging i say .

to the one that holds me dear .

i will allways be there .

when times are tougth and they will.

look no futher for i am there.

ready to hear.

ready to take care.

becuse you hold the key's to my heart.

and my heart is forever your's

 

 

 

p.s i wrote this poem for the one i love but i posted it for all to see becuse i am not afraid to show my love for you . yours truly steve

[Shizzle]

nice, check out the typo errors before you give it her though haret = heart am guessin

[Stinkweed]

That's a great poem. I'm sure that if you do what S4D suggested, the person to whom it is directed will really appreciate it. Great job.

[i_hate_the_world47]

awesome poem.I am sure your loved one will love it.

 

~Meagan~

[hardcore]

sorry guy's im not much of a speller if you know what i meen . were's spell check at on here .thanks i hate the world you are my greates friend

[leslieRN]

Read it, loved it! Thanx for all that you say! Really missed you this weekend

[writergurl]

I love it. So thankful for someone who's not afraid to express their feelings. It's an awesome poem, thanks for sharing. Hope your sweetie can appreciate it too. (It would make me cry if written to me.)