i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 I cry in my room Sinking into that horrible place Where tears come from my wrist Not my blackned face A place where my face bleeds mascara And my wrist cries crimson tears a place where all my dreams are gone A place run by my fears I should be petrified Yet i feel calm as can be because i know when im in this place No one can hurt me But this is a lie i tell my self For i am hurt you see The person who hurts me the most Is the person i cant see This person makes me feel so bad This person wil not let me be But this person will never go away Because this person is me Hey guys anther poem from me.Any comments are greatly appreciated. ~meagan~ Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 That's a great poem. You're a very good writer. Great job =D>. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Great poem I liked it alot keep up the writing Link to comment
ClareMsUK Posted August 12, 2004 Share Posted August 12, 2004 Very deep for someone so young, i am very impressed. you should be published. x Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 12, 2004 Author Share Posted August 12, 2004 Thanx Clare and all the other posters.I wish i could get published but i dont know any one or any where i can.So for now i will just share my poetry at enotalone. ~meagan~ Link to comment
hardcore Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 another great poem i wish i was as good as you but i am not mainly becuse my lack of spelling i think but you all ready know that your friend and allways will be hardcore Link to comment
ClareMsUK Posted August 14, 2004 Share Posted August 14, 2004 hey hardcore, writing poetry is about expressing yourself not how good a speller you are so i am sure you are fantastic. would love to read some of your work too! Clare x Link to comment
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