my poem about what went on 3 months ago!

[loveyounomatterwhat]

All these feelings all this pain,

always walking around like there is nothing to gain.

 

Why cant i feel it and be there like you,

im alone and there is nothing you can do.

 

Im lost and dying,

but i aint crying.

 

Because im sick of this mess,

im living less and less.

 

When im angry inside i put up a fight,

and you calm me down and hold me tight.

 

You say whats your problem?i reply cant you see,

i cant help it, this is me.

 

Im more alone each and every day cuz thats how i think i'll get attention,

but from all of this i see i'll never be mentioned.

 

Some people thought i just needed time away,

and everything would be okay.

 

But what i really wanted and really needed was someone,

who was there for me through everything.

 

I wish everyone knew how hard it is to go through this,

all i wanted to feel was, that i was missed.

 

All i needed was a smile or two,

a pat on the shoulder and a hug from you.

 

Im all better now with the help of all of you who cared,

and now I say thank you to all of whom dared.

 

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Iam very new to writing poems so please just tell me the truth about this

one because i wrote it about what happened in my life 3 months ago so

please just be honest

Thank you and LOveyounomatterwhat

[Stinkweed]

Great poem. It's really good. You're a very good writer. Good job. =D>

[i_hate_the_world47]

that was a god poem.It had great rhythm.

 

~Meagan~

[hardcore]

good poem i wish i could get mine as good but alass no luck