ang3l2004 Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 My love how could you forget what we had? Leave me alone in the dark so sad. You never thought about how I would feel, Just made me believe that this was real. Do you know that you are my one true love, The one that was sent from heaven above. I have tryed to show you that I still care, But one by one at my heart you tear. Do you believe that this is all the end? I cannot believe it from the messages you send. Let me make one thing clear before I go, It might not work but I love you so. Please hold out your hand and place it with me, Open back up your heart and soul and see. Dont run away from me dont put up a wall, It makes me feel worthless and makes me feel small. I love you so much even more then before, Even though it was you that walked out that door. So hopefully you still care and have me in your heart, So that on this earth we dont have to fly apart. tell me what u think??? Link to comment
JuJu Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 I like it. I think it's very good and very well written. Good Job! Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 that poem was lovely. I hope one day you'll be past all that pain and I know that man will realize he lost something incredible. if you ever need to talk, feel free to pm me. I just lost someone i love very much, i know how it feels. under Link to comment
sayer7 Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 Wonderful as usual! It expressed a lot of what I've been feeling the last few days, healing from a break-up that I know is necessary for my own good. I hope one day he realizes he loved me and wishes he could have me back. Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Yet another amazing poem.You are an extraordinary poet.Keep up the good work. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Esprit Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Very nice! I like it! Heres a site you might be interested in (to post poems, stories and such and have other writers/the general public read and review them) link removed (...and if you want, my pen name's dyn ) Anyhoo, swell poem! Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 That's really good. Such deep feelings for another person... I hope you feel better soon. Good job. Link to comment
lunatic Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I loved it sweety and I am sorry that I am so busy lately. My life is really hetic but, it will slow down a bit soon. Keep the poetry flowing because you have such a great way with words. Hubman 8) Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thankyou all very much for reading and replying and giving me such good responses makes me smile and happy to know that when I express myself through words that people honestly like it once again thanks Link to comment
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