your leaving

[ang3l2004]

I love you,You are my heart soul my everything,

Your moving tomorrow im hurting already with a broken wing.

 

I dont want you to leave even though we are apart,

What happen to the new beginning our fresh start?

 

This hurts me so much and I am in tears,

Never has this happen to me in all my 21 years.

 

The person that im in love with is moving miles away,

I really want to call him up and beg him with my heart to stay.

 

I sit here in the silence and think about you not being around,

I can hear my tears one by one falling to the ground.

 

Please never forget me please know that your in my heart,

I am going to miss you forever and loved you from the start.

 

My arms are wide open and waiting for you to return,

I will never let this love go I will never let this burn.

 

tell me what you think

[Duderanomi]

*You're leaving

[ang3l2004]

I know I was to upset to make changes or worry about how things were written just wanted to express myself but thanks

[Duderanomi]

I just figured that mroe people will read the poem if it appears to have a sound grammatical base. Good grammar looks prettier, sounds better, and is easier to read. Reviewing your post for punctuation and typos always attracts more replies.

[lunatic]

Sorry to hear about your pain Ang3l but, now the No contact rule will be easier to enforce. You need to put the past behind you and start down the road to a healed new you...

 

 

Your a great person Ang3l and from all the conversations we have had your going to have no problems finding another man to be with that will be there for you. I truly believe there is someone out there that is just right for us.

 

First you have to start to mend your broken heart and then you can start your life over again.

 

Good luck and I am sorry about the newest pain your dealing with...

 

 

 

Hubman 8)

[i_hate_the_world47]

i wish i had ur talent.Another masterful poem.

 

~meagan~

[ang3l2004]

Thankyou

[Stinkweed]

I've read tons of poems written by you. And they all surprise me. Where do you find the inspiration? =D> Keep up the good work.

[ang3l2004]

I just write based on my feelings and sometimes I am just expressing thanks alot