ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 I am looking in the mirror and what do I see? I see my reflection staring back at me. Telling me to be happy and do my best, This is not an option or a test. I look in the mirror and what do I see, The pain of a little girl coming right through me. If you were looking at me what would you think, What a happy girl beautiful and dressed in pink. But you dont really know how I feel inside, I guess I just pretend run and hide. Put yourself in my shoes oneday, You would want out you would hope and pray. I look in the mirror only to find, That mabe it is all in my mind. They tell me your so pretty and you can make it through, But what they dont know is I have tryed that to. I look in the mirror only to see, That no matter what that person will always be me. Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 OMG What a great poem Ang3l. You have a serious talent and I really wish you would put this up on a poetic site!!!! Your so damn talented!!! Hubman [-o Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Author Share Posted July 27, 2004 thankyou hub lol DONT U BE CUSSIN AT ME!!!!! JK LOL Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 Never would cuss at you ever!!!!! No way my dear I just hate to see talent like yours wasted. I hope you reconsider submitting some of your work out there. You should try to cultivate your talent and try to get your name out there. hubman Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Author Share Posted July 27, 2004 thankyou so much I have no clue where to look I guess I can just hunt around to find somewhere but I dont think that my poems are that great hehe Link to comment
kamurj Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 ang3l2004, check link removed It has lists of online poetry sites in alphabetical lists. also you might find some at link removed Link to comment
CarterJonas Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 I'd like to add that I also enjoyed your poem, very well written. good luck with posting it on a 'poem' site. Link to comment
kamurj Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 Before you publish your poems on other sites make sure that they can not claim they own them because the poems were published in their system and you are just the author. I don't know about poems but I have seen it happening with web content in general. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Author Share Posted July 27, 2004 Ok thanks alot for the advice and thankyou all for the nice replies Link to comment
Duderanomi Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 I love the poem, just has that awesome rhythm to it. Great job! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 28, 2004 Share Posted July 28, 2004 I loved your poem.Not only was it well written but i could relate to it.I completely agree with hubman,you need to get your name out there. Link to comment
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