ang3l2004 Posted June 4, 2004 Share Posted June 4, 2004 My heart is beating and is so pure of pain, electricity flowing sparks flying we are one, I feel you close to me even when your far, There is nothing to lose and everything to gain. Mind body and soul I love you, No words can express what you mean to me, Fire blazing deep in my soul, No water can put it out no matter how blue. Slowly gazing to the stars that remind me Sparkling high above everything Wishing loving and hoping Sitting on the beach our love goes deeper then the sea. Feelings of you gone would hurt me so As my heart and yours beats as one Powerful happiness and joy all around me Only you and I both know. As you gently touch my face and whisper in my ear, I feel the heat I feel the love I place my hand on your chest and feel your heart beat, As I look into your eyes I begin to tear. As the sun rises so do we, Holding eachother all night in ecstasy, The feeling of never letting go, This is how it is supose to be. I dont know if u can undestand this but please post how you think this sounds thanks Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted June 4, 2004 Share Posted June 4, 2004 Once again, Ang3l...I like it. It doesn't speak to me personally but I enjoyed reading it and I want to thank you for sharing it with us. ~Under~ Link to comment
Mix Maxster Posted June 5, 2004 Share Posted June 5, 2004 wow that's a great poem I should really add more than that but ya ang3l that's an amazing poem... makes me wonder how you're holding out as I'm sure that's straight from the heart. Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 5, 2004 Share Posted June 5, 2004 Hi there, I enjoyed reading your poem... great use of words there. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 it seems really deep felt. this is the part i liked best the sun rises so do we, Holding eachother all night in ecstasy, The feeling of never letting go, This is how it is supose to be. EmptySoul Link to comment
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