AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 I'm aware its not a masterpeice. I'm also aware it doesn't really flow correctly. It was more just random thoughts. But i thought i would share it anyway You were my safety net, when all was lost, you caught me. You were the shelter through the thunderstorm, you were the beauty through the lightening, you were everything to me. And now that i see you, for what you truly are, i'm broken, i'm afraid. And now that i hear, the words that were once mute, i feel it, the danger. It surrounds me. Don't let it get me, please, i'm tortured. I can't forget the pain, the endless hurt. I can't resist the only way, i know will make it fade, make it fade away. And i'm sorry, i know i will forever be lost. With you, without you, its become all the same. You were my safety net, when all was lost, you caught me. Link to comment
Salicia Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 The poem was very powerful and it impacted me. Thank you for opening yourself up to share your feelings. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 25, 2009 Author Share Posted November 25, 2009 Thanks Salicia, glad someone liked it Link to comment
agburns84 Posted November 26, 2009 Share Posted November 26, 2009 Hey there Anotherbrokendoll, It's very beautiful! So strong and emotional - I'm happy to see another one of your poems! Hope all is well x Link to comment
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