EmptySoul Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 a fallen angel fell from clouds and grace she lifts her face to the sky and rain falls his anguished tears for his missing angel she closes her eyes, and looks within "Please let me be your angel again." and the rain falls harder as he feels her words destined to walk alone now before unseeing eyes bloody, beaten and wingless she sits alone in her earthly hell she lifts her face to the clouds and struggles to look within- "I'd do anything to take it back, to be your angel again." But the sun just shines, and no rain will fall Because though she cries and cries No one hears No one at all ______________ I like the story in this poem, but as a poem itself I don't think it is good. Maybe I will be able to make it better soon. I hope... EmptySoul Link to comment
Drumson Posted May 6, 2004 Share Posted May 6, 2004 i really like this poem. it seems like it has to do with a breakup and he wanting you back or something and has a possible deeper meaning with religion intertwined possibly. good job Link to comment
lil_unique_me Posted May 7, 2004 Share Posted May 7, 2004 i agree i like this poem but i think that it works on two levels rather than just the simple breakup. its almost like he too away your soul and you want it back but there is no way of getting it back do u know what i mean? Catie xxx Link to comment
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