my feelings!

[lil_unique_me]

you look at me and i feel tingly

can you even see me?

i want to show you how i feel

but we are worlds apart

 

you look at me and i feel loved

do you know what you do to me?

i want to know how you feel

please- its killing me

 

you look at me as though im a child

maybe i am but wernt you once?

i know what i feel

i love you

 

you cant see what you are doing to me

you dont even know

i want to tell you how i feel

i just need a signal

 

we could be so good together

i need you- your all i have left in my life

to be in your arms is pure heven

cant you see that this love was meant to be?

 

Catie xxx - let me know what you think

 

you fight an invisible war

you dont know each other

and yet you fight over me

you cannot see the pain written into my body

you dont even see me at all

im nothing to you

just an object for you to shout at

thats all i was made for

[neva_black_n_white]

i liked your poem, it seemed to be written on two levels, maybe one with hope or just pure desire for answers and the other the subconscious answers you feel are true and what would be those that he would give you.

 

each of what you wrote seemed to be from the heart and to me thats what makes a great piece of work.

 

keep us posted with this one

kel

[lil_unique_me]

thank you very much. maybe i can explain them a bit?

ok the first one is cos i love this guy who all my friends think is attracted to me but i dont know what to do about that

the other is a fight between my mum and step mum.

Catie xxx

[tears_fall_invisibly]

i really liked the both of your poems, why is it that there is a constant battle between your mum and step mum?

 

tears_fall_invisibly

[lil_unique_me]

there just is. its just that since my parents got divorced the other is always sticking their nose in tho others business even though they are both now remarried.

hope this explains to you

Catie xxx