LemonCheesecak Posted April 28, 2009 Share Posted April 28, 2009 Continuing a recurring theme.... Only you know where this ends Only you know, my friend Because we travel on, unravel from The things we fear, what we've become There's no more time for compromise No, no more time for vacant lies We learn from what we've learned before No need to question anymore Just drive... These words are shameless, words are pure But only words, and not a cure No use in finding answers, you Know where this journey takes us to The end... So sleep my friend Just sleep Around the bend They keep The answers to all that you seek In voices still afraid to speak Voices of ghosts Link to comment
paintedfish Posted April 28, 2009 Share Posted April 28, 2009 "Because we travel on, unravel from The things we fear, what we've become" "We learn from what we've learned before No need to question anymore" Love it. Love the cadence it has, love the truth in it, the finality to the end. Famazing. Link to comment
LemonCheesecak Posted April 28, 2009 Author Share Posted April 28, 2009 Thank you! I don't actually know where a lot of it came from, or what it means, but I guess that's just an indicator of a truth not even I know. Link to comment
paintedfish Posted April 29, 2009 Share Posted April 29, 2009 That's usually what I have to say about my stuff. It just pops into my head, and only after I read it do I decide if it makes any sense or not. I have never been able to rhyme without getting cheesy or contrived. You escaped both! Definitely impressive. Link to comment
LemonCheesecak Posted April 29, 2009 Author Share Posted April 29, 2009 Haha I appreciate the compliment but everything I write seems cheesy and contrived to me in reflection. It all gets put in the notebook though, where I'm forbidden to edit. Link to comment
angakoq Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 i'll give u a rating instead 4/5! bravo 1 Link to comment
flyingdodo Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 I keep re-reading this because it reminds me of something, I just can't think what! I really like it 1 Link to comment
LemonCheesecak Posted May 8, 2009 Author Share Posted May 8, 2009 I keep re-reading this because it reminds me of something, I just can't think what! I really like it Haha if I'm honest I'm waiting for the moment where I realise I've ripped off some song I like. It's happened before! I'm glad you like it though Link to comment
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