JCR84 Posted May 16, 2008 Share Posted May 16, 2008 why am i looking for you? if you dont want me anymore? what do you win? by making me cry? you ripped my soul into pieces and with all this emptiness your letting me die you know very well your life is my life that you have defeated in your hands if you deny me your kisses then take my life dont make me suffer dont go my love I beg of you God knows very well how much I love you if your kisses are fake then let death come and take us both id rather be six feet under than to know that you are betraying me because i feel inside that I am dying with such hurt its because I have never felt such a feeling of an knife deep in my heart that you know is killing me little by little Dont go I beg of you Dont throw this away but if you do Dont leave me bleeding Dont leave the knife half way Finish the job I beg of you Link to comment
eurocar Posted May 16, 2008 Share Posted May 16, 2008 Nice poem. It's sad when somebody leaves you, isn't it? BTW, I had to look twice at y'all's avatar to make sure you weren't the same person. Both sunsets, similar framing, etc. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 16, 2008 Share Posted May 16, 2008 You can feel your pain coming through. Keep posting your work. I love emotional poetry. Its the best kind if you ask me. It really does hurt when someone is decietful, but i assure you there will be others who will treat you right. Link to comment
morgane Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 someone just bury me sorry this is kind of irrelavent but six feet under is my fav show of all time Link to comment
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