dazedpunk1607306446 Posted February 7, 2003 Share Posted February 7, 2003 LUNA >yesterday i saw u and him together >and i felt so alone >just the thought of you with another >makes me sadder than thsi poem >last night i dremt our eyes met accross a crowded room >and love shined brighter than the summer sun at noon >i woke up and realized that youve already made your choice >but nothing on earth can silence this voice >if he ever breaks your heart, Livey, dont despair >if u fall, ill run and catch u there >now i stand her under the dancing lady in the moon >she twirls her scarf and fades away, but my love is here to say Link to comment
iN_ThE_DaRK Posted February 9, 2003 Share Posted February 9, 2003 you did a good job on the poem. it means a lot to me and has probably touched others too. it reminds me when i lost kevin, and i guess it was partially my fault because i really didnt make a move on him or anything. well, it was great, just wanted to encourage you to keep writing and just wish you luck. dont worry, she'll come through, as long as you hang on and never let go. Link to comment
eterna2 Posted February 9, 2003 Share Posted February 9, 2003 this is so sweet, u shld clean up the typos thou Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 5, 2003 Share Posted September 5, 2003 I thought it was great, very heartfelt indded. Well done and keep it up Link to comment
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