Daddy Bear Posted April 23, 2008 Share Posted April 23, 2008 Cutieful Britonfish Squee, baybee, squee Zoom in my room and Squirt squidlove on me Let's build a bubble Where hearts can float free Smile at me Silently Sweet shrimpanzee Sleep with no tuckiebyes Me with no you Just like your pretty eyes Poobag's grey-blue Bunnyboochickumbits Shawts, whurr ya be? Two minus One... Zero fun... Love, DB 1 Link to comment
ryan123 Posted April 23, 2008 Share Posted April 23, 2008 Your poetry confuses yet excites me. Link to comment
ProtestTheHero Posted April 23, 2008 Share Posted April 23, 2008 Obviously a take on Seuss with the structure, although the first thing I thought when I saw the title was the MASH song. Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted April 25, 2008 Author Share Posted April 25, 2008 Obviously a take on Seuss with the structure, although the first thing I thought when I saw the title was the MASH song. Right on both counts. The song is a take-off on Seuss's Beautiful Kittenfish, itself a parody of Stephen Foster's classic Beautiful Dreamer (here sung with characteristic soul by Roy Orbison). My title was both a wry plea to the despondent and a play on the M*A*S*H theme music. Thanks to everyone for the comments. Link to comment
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