just_smile Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 hey guys, heres something my friend wrote: its called the rhythm of my poem. The rhythm of my poem Is like the beat of my heart Never quite the same But always to the same cause It beats on to the end of time The rhythm of my poem Is as constant as my love It never dies It never wavers It lives on The rhythm of my poem Is like the rising sun It blooms and blossoms like a flower Not a dropping bomb Its for life not death The rhythm of my poem Will reach the corners of the earth End distruction Beat for one cause Which is love and peace any comments appreciated, or new verses ~LJ =;[/b] Link to comment
sphinx999 Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 The rhythm of my poem Reflects the rhythm of my heart Which shows the need for peace People die and no one cares This verse is for them thats my voice for this cause sphinx xxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted December 4, 2003 Share Posted December 4, 2003 hey i love the poem just_smile and great additional verse sphinx999. i enjoyed what you were writing and thought it was new to what im usually used to reading. thanks for sharing this. kel Link to comment
just_smile Posted December 6, 2003 Author Share Posted December 6, 2003 hey thanks you two for the responses Sphinx i really liked you last verse what do you think: the rhythm of my poem. The rhythm of my poem Is like the beat of my heart Never quite the same But always to the same cause It beats on to the end of time The rhythm of my poem Is as constant as my love It never dies It never wavers It lives on The rhythm of my poem Is like the rising sun It blooms and blossoms like a flower Not a dropping bomb Its for life not death The rhythm of my poem Will reach the corners of the earth End distruction Beat for one cause Which is love and peace The rhythm of my poem Reflects the rhythm of my heart Which shows the need for peace People die and no one cares This verse is for them Neva: thanks for your response too ~LJ =; Link to comment
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