blu87ro Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 I’m the girl in purple red, walking every sad autumn morning down the lonely path of the bloody colored park watching the dance of falling leaves and the runaway of swainsons accross the page of a gray sky I’m the girl in frozen white drawing ice-flowers on burned paper as the pale wintermoon appears beyond dead reflections of flakes lightning a candle inside outside my window sings a sleepy nightingale I’m the girl in violet blue, wondering over lost boulevards after the cloudy sunset of an early spring day hiding burning tears in the cold rain and the whisper of a heartache in the rush of dull umbrellas I’m the girl in golden black, standing everywhere you go in the everlasting shadows of a darken summer moonlight waiting for your eyes to raise to me on a silent moment as the time goes anticlockwise Link to comment
Dagless Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 I love it. "hiding burning tears in the cold rain and the whisper of a heartache in the rush of dull umbrellas" What a line, brilliant. Link to comment
arwen Posted February 25, 2008 Share Posted February 25, 2008 You are talented. The poem is very structured, yet not sought for at all. As if the words just 'rolled' out of you. Link to comment
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