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[musicguy]

Sweet are your lips against mine,

tastes so good, wet like wine.

Your eyes are the heaven in which I lie,

as beautiful as the bluest sky.

 

Your voice is calming, sweet and soothing,

the way I feel about you,

a love that's true.

 

You're there for me,

I'm there for you,

as the best boyfriend that I can be.

 

You're my rock,

my dream,

my everything.

 

 

Musicguy ©Feb. 2007

[hosswhispra]

I love reading your poetry, MG.

 

I especially love the third and fourth line of your first stanza:

Your eyes are the heaven in which I lie,

as beautiful as the bluest sky.

 

 

Then for this:

 

Sweet are your lips against mine,

tastes so good, wet like wine

 

I think I would go with: Sweet are your lips against mine, tastes so good, like the finest merlot.....

 

What do you think?